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Thirteen.
Thirteen fears.
Thirteen haunted years.
Thirteen cold bitter tears.
Thirteen memories linger and leer.
Thirteen days pass as death nears.
Thirteen screams that no one ever hears.
Thirteen foggy futures that never come out clear.
Thirteen cries for help that die when fate sneers.
Thirteen faceless figures that hear all helpless cries without ears.
Thirteen towering clocks that chime each passing life with dusty gears.
Thirteen windows that never break against the pounding fists and bloody smears.
Thirteen words that echo, echo, echo through the insanity your mind surely bears.
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I'm gonna call this free-verse to be on the safe side... :paranoid:

I don't often write dark poetry like this (or free-verse for that matter), as my watchers may know. Each line has one more word than the last, starting at one and ending at thirteen. Just a passing idea; if you have any remarks on the format or wording, feel free to leave a comment for me.

Written for #CreepinOnCatastrophe's "Cursed Number" contest, celebrating our 13 members! :evillaugh:

Copyright © 2012 *ScarletDevil1503. All rights reserved.
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Dark, but haunting. I like it.
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~ScarletDevil1503 Apr 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. :giggle:
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~Lilliozwest Mar 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow. You are really good. It is hard to get a reaction out of me with peotry but you seem to do it. Thats impressive...
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~ScarletDevil1503 Mar 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Lol, I'm glad! :lol: Thank you very much.
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~Ichigo-Kurokawa Mar 8, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I cant believe you were actually able to plan this out so perfectly, it may be dark but the format and the decriptions are just perfect. I love it. ^.^
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~ScarletDevil1503 Mar 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It was a fleeting idea, really -- I don't often put much planning into my poetry. :D

I'm so glad you like it! Thanks for the comment. :heart:
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~Ichigo-Kurokawa Mar 11, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wow that makes it even more amazing. If i were to do something like this i would end up planing it for hours. XD
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~KatiAllisNeon Feb 21, 2012  Student Artist
This sounds a bit like Sixteen Moons from Beautiful Creatures and Seventeen Moons from Beautiful Darkness.
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~ScarletDevil1503 Feb 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:typerhappy: *quickly Googles*

:tunes: *listens to YouTube video*

It sort of does! It has that creepy, building theme to it with the same rhymes and everything. I'd never heard that song before, but now that I have, I feel unoriginal. :( Anyways, thanks for the comment. :aww:
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