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I'll remember you
when someone steals my breath
so I can't even speak.

I'll remember you
when the rain beats so hard
I can't hear myself think.

I'll remember you
when I see a careless smile
on a young girl's face.

I'll remember you
when my heart aches
in a lonely place.

I'll remember you
when the going gets rough
and no one's there for me.

I'll remember you
when I fruitlessly wish
for things that used to be.

I'll remember you
when I see someone smile
as they hide a sigh.

I'll remember you
when someone's surprised
at the word "goodbye."

I'll remember you
when another claims to be
my other half.

I'll remember you, darling...
I'll remember and laugh.
The memory remains in all that I do, but I still fight to forget.

Copyright 2012 *ScarletDevil1503. All rights reserved.
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XDotsuX Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013
I rememberd unwanted memories and i was sure that iv killed them and burred them deeeeep inside T.T 
Ur words are soo touching made me drop a tear :( 
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ananyaoi Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2012
thats so touching and beautiful, i-i just was thinking... you should write songs as a job... food-for-though.
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ScarletDevil1503 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, I don't know if people would actually pay for my little scribbles... :XD: Thanks for the kind thought! :heart:
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ananyaoi Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012
you could write a book of "little scribbles" or you can sell them as songs.
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MiracleMoon124 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012
Goodness, I just adore your poetry! You make me want to get back to writing :]
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ScarletDevil1503 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
That's great to hear! Thank you kindly. :heart:
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CuddleSlut17 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I really like this one. I love how you used. I'll remember you for the first line of every stanza. Good structure :)
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ScarletDevil1503 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much. :huggle: :heart:
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CuddleSlut17 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Anytime :)
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Hatchetgabby Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow,i realy welled up,so beautiful,you discribe the emotion process perfectly,or atleast mine lol I've felt this peom.
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