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I'll remember you
when someone steals my breath
so I can't even speak.

I'll remember you
when the rain beats so hard
I can't hear myself think.

I'll remember you
when I see a careless smile
on a young girl's face.

I'll remember you
when my heart aches
in a lonely place.

I'll remember you
when the going gets rough
and no one's there for me.

I'll remember you
when I fruitlessly wish
for things that used to be.

I'll remember you
when I see someone smile
as they hide a sigh.

I'll remember you
when someone's surprised
at the word "goodbye."

I'll remember you
when another claims to be
my other half.

I'll remember you, darling...
I'll remember and laugh.
The memory remains in all that I do, but I still fight to forget.

Copyright © 2012 *ScarletDevil1503. All rights reserved.
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XDotsuX Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013
I rememberd unwanted memories and i was sure that iv killed them and burred them deeeeep inside T.T 
Ur words are soo touching made me drop a tear :( 
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ananyaoi Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2012
thats so touching and beautiful, i-i just was thinking... you should write songs as a job... food-for-though.
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ScarletDevil1503 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, I don't know if people would actually pay for my little scribbles... :XD: Thanks for the kind thought! :heart:
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ananyaoi Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012
you could write a book of "little scribbles" or you can sell them as songs.
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MiracleMoon124 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012
Goodness, I just adore your poetry! You make me want to get back to writing :]
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ScarletDevil1503 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
That's great to hear! Thank you kindly. :heart:
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CuddleSlut17 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I really like this one. I love how you used. I'll remember you for the first line of every stanza. Good structure :)
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ScarletDevil1503 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much. :huggle: :heart:
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CuddleSlut17 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Anytime :)
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Hatchetgabby Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow,i realy welled up,so beautiful,you discribe the emotion process perfectly,or atleast mine lol I've felt this peom.
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ScarletDevil1503 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! I'm glad you can connect with my writing. :huggle:
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Hatchetgabby Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:heart:
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slipcast-chrysalism Featured By Owner May 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is beautiful.
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ScarletDevil1503 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :heart:
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clara954 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012
Very sweet. I enjoy the flow of the poem.
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ScarletDevil1503 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad. Thank you. :aww:
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malikvamp Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012
Beautiful <3 this relates so well to a situation I've been through! I love the way it is written, truly well done :) I can't wait to see more great works from you!
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ScarletDevil1503 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much! :tighthug:
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malikvamp Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012
thank you :)
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Dappledleaves Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Definitely one of my favorite literary works that I've read in a while.
This is great.. It captures the essence of moving on in life despite lingering sentiments, perhaps a bittersweet feeling. And to me.. well, it certainly describes the past six months in my life. :)
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ScarletDevil1503 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad you can relate to my poem; I think we all feel this way at some point. Thank you for such a kind comment. :heart:
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Dappledleaves Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh no, thank /you/ for sharing such a wonderful poem. :)
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ScarletDevil1503 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:tighthug:
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angelichope Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012
It's so sweet, and beautiful; reading this was very refreshing, and reminding of the goodness of love and friendship!!!:iconcuteheartplz:
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ScarletDevil1503 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm so glad you see it that way! Thank you for your kind words. :tighthug:
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angelichope Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012
So very welcome!!!:iconsomehugsplz:
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ScyphozoanPrincess Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012
Ohh, my... *PFZT* I'm getting all choked up and teary-eyed just from reading this. It's bittersweet-beautiful.
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ScarletDevil1503 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh dear, thank you. :huggle:
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lifeisgood4u Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2012  Student Writer
Aw. My god just give him/her a hug!!
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ScarletDevil1503 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hehe :aww: :hug:
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lifeisgood4u Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2012  Student Writer
Aw. -hug-
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lintu47 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hello, you have been featured in my weekly dA love for everyone! article.
Have a nice day :huggle:
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ScarletDevil1503 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
That's very generous of you! I appreciate it greatly. :hug:
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lintu47 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
My pleasure :huggle:
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ilikethose Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012
The reason this is so good is that it makes me very sad...
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ScarletDevil1503 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, thank you. :huggle:
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ilikethose Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2012
Thanks for the hug. ^_^
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Plocana Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012
I don't read poetry and that's just...really cool... It all blends so well together...
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ScarletDevil1503 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for taking the time to read my poem! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :thanks:
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Virro-Wallace Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012
*claps* lovely.
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ScarletDevil1503 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :aww:
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Reality-Glitch Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012  Student General Artist
Very touching, I get similar feelings from time to time.
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ScarletDevil1503 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad you can relate. Thank you for commenting. :heart:
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Reality-Glitch Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012  Student General Artist
Your welcome
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MemoryTrip Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012
I love this. It's beautiful. A great friend of mine passed away a couple of months ago and this is exactly how I feel.
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ScarletDevil1503 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. I'm grateful that you can relate, yet saddened all the same. Memories of lost loved ones can often be bittersweet, I know. Keep strong. :hug:
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MemoryTrip Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012
Thank you :)
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Megilar Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Geez, what a lovely and breath-taking piece of literature..
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ScarletDevil1503 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
My goodness! Thank you very much. :heart:
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lovemypunkin7 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012  Student General Artist
im so sorry for you but i just want you to know that your not alone its been about three years now and it still hurts for me so i hope what everybody says is true that it'll get better but i kinda doubt it.
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