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I'll remember you
when someone steals my breath
so I can't even speak.

I'll remember you
when the rain beats so hard
I can't hear myself think.

I'll remember you
when I see a careless smile
on a young girl's face.

I'll remember you
when my heart aches
in a lonely place.

I'll remember you
when the going gets rough
and no one's there for me.

I'll remember you
when I fruitlessly wish
for things that used to be.

I'll remember you
when I see someone smile
as they hide a sigh.

I'll remember you
when someone's surprised
at the word "goodbye."

I'll remember you
when another claims to be
my other half.

I'll remember you, darling...
I'll remember and laugh.

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The memory remains in all that I do, but I still fight to forget.

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:iconananyaoi:
thats so touching and beautiful, i-i just was thinking... you should write songs as a job... food-for-though.
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~ScarletDevil1503 Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, I don't know if people would actually pay for my little scribbles... :XD: Thanks for the kind thought! :heart:
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:iconananyaoi:
you could write a book of "little scribbles" or you can sell them as songs.
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:iconmiraclemoon124:
Goodness, I just adore your poetry! You make me want to get back to writing :]
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~ScarletDevil1503 Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
That's great to hear! Thank you kindly. :heart:
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~CuddleSlut17 Jun 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I really like this one. I love how you used. I'll remember you for the first line of every stanza. Good structure :)
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~ScarletDevil1503 Jun 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much. :huggle: :heart:
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~CuddleSlut17 Jun 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Anytime :)
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*Hatchetgabby Jun 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow,i realy welled up,so beautiful,you discribe the emotion process perfectly,or atleast mine lol I've felt this peom.
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~ScarletDevil1503 Jun 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! I'm glad you can connect with my writing. :huggle:
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